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Post by prouvaire on Jul 24, 2006 10:04:49 GMT -4
I'm a big fanfic writer, and I've written a few Lost-fics featuring Henry. This is my latest one, and since it's the one that really delves the deepest into his mind, I wanted to post it here for criticism, since you guys are as into Henry as I am. (Warning: 18+) jean-prouvaire.livejournal.com/285522.html |
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Post by amidala64 on Jul 25, 2006 6:04:24 GMT -4
Well, it's not my cup of tea but you certainly have alot of emotional energy. Perhaps a disclaimer about its adult theme is in order. I'm not sure your version of Henry is consistent with the Henry Gale that Michael created. From the comments section of your LJ it looks like you have a satisfied audience. thanks for sharing
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Post by red on Jul 25, 2006 6:44:15 GMT -4
That was certainly interesting. I'm not sure it's canon with what the writers or actors had in mind, but I can see how you would get that from watching them on the show. Locke does cry like a little girl sometimes. I can easily see him being the sub to Henry or Jack as I already think he and Jack fight like a married couple and you can just guess who I think is the woman in that relationship. That's exactly the thought that went through my mind when Henry said, "what with you two fighting all the time."
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Post by prouvaire on Jul 25, 2006 9:24:38 GMT -4
Thanks for the reviews, guys.
Can I ask you to elaborate a little? I really want to know what to change/improve on.
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Post by sailornova on Jan 8, 2007 23:43:54 GMT -4
I haven't read your story but from what's been posted here about it, it sounds like a slash story! Is it?  |
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Post by Edith S. Baker on Jan 9, 2007 10:52:30 GMT -4
Well, it's not my cup of tea but you certainly have alot of emotional energy. Perhaps a disclaimer about its adult theme is in order. I'm not sure your version of Henry is consistent with the Henry Gale that Michael created. From the comments section of your LJ it looks like you have a satisfied audience. thanks for sharing I think the 18+ warning is right above the link to the fiction story. |
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Post by flummery on Jan 9, 2007 19:54:05 GMT -4
I think the 18+ warning is right above the link to the fiction story. I added that warning after Amidala replied that it needed one. ;D |
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Post by greenleaf on Jan 14, 2007 15:31:59 GMT -4
greenleaf-y.livejournal.com/I have translated big fic about Ben from Russian to English. I worry very much it will be clear to English-speaking readers. Translation is not so good. In Russian fic is better.  I shall be glad to receive any comments, even negative. 
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