Post by melissaq9 on Mar 18, 2007 1:25:57 GMT -4
Hello!
I have been working on a new fanfiction featuring Ben.
It is called "Taken" and is set right after the Others leave the Hydra to go "home". It has Ben, or course, Juliet, Jack, Tom, Isabel, and my own character I created. I am thinking some things from the show may stay the same but some may change.
I hope you all enjoy it and please let me know what you think.
Here is the link to the first five chapters-
www.fanfiction.net/s/3446033/1/
Also here is the first chapter, it is pretty short and might give an idea on how the story will go.
Chapter 1-Coming Home
Izzi opened the door and looked outside for the tenth time in the past half hour. Seeing nothing she sighed and shut the door. She glanced at the mantle to check the time and she saw his picture. He was smiling, something he rarely did, and had his arms wrapped around her. She remembered that day; it had been one of their good ones.
They had been sitting outside in the courtyard simply enjoying each others company. He’d arranged for them to have a picnic and the attention he paid to every little detail amused Izzi. He had been really trying to please her that day and he had succeeded. They talked for hours, for once not dissolving into arguing like they normally did. It was refreshing to have a real, decent conversation with him. Normally he would do or say something that would set off her quick temper and she would end up yelling at him.
A smile crossed Izzi’s lips. Yes, that had been a good day, but that was a long time ago.
Izzi looked at the picture again and frowned.
God how she hated him!
When he left she vowed that she would never speak to him again. She had been serious too. Seeing him standing in front of her with his face blank of any emotion she thought it would be wonderful if she never had to see him again. She hoped he would just for once give in and let her have her way. Instead he just laughed and told her he would welcome the quiet when he returned.
That had been weeks ago; so many days that she had lost count. Sure, she could look at the calendar but then she would only be reminded how long he had really been gone. With every passing day Izzi found herself hating him a little more.
Why had he felt the need to leave her behind?
She was alone in this creepy place. She had never felt comfortable here. As much as they tried to make it seem like a normal place to live it didn’t change the reality of where they were. It reminded her of episodes of The Twilight Zone she had seen when she was young. Only this wasn’t a TV show that was over in an hour, this was real and it never ended.
Of the few people that had stayed behind no one would talk to her. They were under his orders not to. She tried in vain to talk to them about anything. But nothing she could say would make them disobey his orders.
For those reasons and many more she claimed she hated him.
But what bothered her even more was how much she missed him. Deep down she knew she was head over heels for the man. Was it possible to hate and love someone at the same time? There had been a time when she simply loved him and then another when she hated him so much she would have killed him if she had been able. But to feel the two emotions together? This was something she had yet to experience. No matter what she felt she was going crazy waiting for him to come back to her.
After not knowing or hearing anything for weeks Izzi finally received a message. It was as frustrating as it was beautiful.
‘We’re on our way.’ was all it had said but those four words had been echoing in her mind the past two days.
Now they were due in less than ten minutes and she couldn’t sit still.
Her husband was finally coming back to her.
Ben was coming home.
I have been working on a new fanfiction featuring Ben.
It is called "Taken" and is set right after the Others leave the Hydra to go "home". It has Ben, or course, Juliet, Jack, Tom, Isabel, and my own character I created. I am thinking some things from the show may stay the same but some may change.
I hope you all enjoy it and please let me know what you think.
Here is the link to the first five chapters-
www.fanfiction.net/s/3446033/1/
Also here is the first chapter, it is pretty short and might give an idea on how the story will go.
Chapter 1-Coming Home
Izzi opened the door and looked outside for the tenth time in the past half hour. Seeing nothing she sighed and shut the door. She glanced at the mantle to check the time and she saw his picture. He was smiling, something he rarely did, and had his arms wrapped around her. She remembered that day; it had been one of their good ones.
They had been sitting outside in the courtyard simply enjoying each others company. He’d arranged for them to have a picnic and the attention he paid to every little detail amused Izzi. He had been really trying to please her that day and he had succeeded. They talked for hours, for once not dissolving into arguing like they normally did. It was refreshing to have a real, decent conversation with him. Normally he would do or say something that would set off her quick temper and she would end up yelling at him.
A smile crossed Izzi’s lips. Yes, that had been a good day, but that was a long time ago.
Izzi looked at the picture again and frowned.
God how she hated him!
When he left she vowed that she would never speak to him again. She had been serious too. Seeing him standing in front of her with his face blank of any emotion she thought it would be wonderful if she never had to see him again. She hoped he would just for once give in and let her have her way. Instead he just laughed and told her he would welcome the quiet when he returned.
That had been weeks ago; so many days that she had lost count. Sure, she could look at the calendar but then she would only be reminded how long he had really been gone. With every passing day Izzi found herself hating him a little more.
Why had he felt the need to leave her behind?
She was alone in this creepy place. She had never felt comfortable here. As much as they tried to make it seem like a normal place to live it didn’t change the reality of where they were. It reminded her of episodes of The Twilight Zone she had seen when she was young. Only this wasn’t a TV show that was over in an hour, this was real and it never ended.
Of the few people that had stayed behind no one would talk to her. They were under his orders not to. She tried in vain to talk to them about anything. But nothing she could say would make them disobey his orders.
For those reasons and many more she claimed she hated him.
But what bothered her even more was how much she missed him. Deep down she knew she was head over heels for the man. Was it possible to hate and love someone at the same time? There had been a time when she simply loved him and then another when she hated him so much she would have killed him if she had been able. But to feel the two emotions together? This was something she had yet to experience. No matter what she felt she was going crazy waiting for him to come back to her.
After not knowing or hearing anything for weeks Izzi finally received a message. It was as frustrating as it was beautiful.
‘We’re on our way.’ was all it had said but those four words had been echoing in her mind the past two days.
Now they were due in less than ten minutes and she couldn’t sit still.
Her husband was finally coming back to her.
Ben was coming home.
And the idea that she is Ben's wife - oh how I would want to be on her place LOL!
Oh wow...uh, yeah. 
