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Post by Isobel on Mar 25, 2007 5:18:38 GMT -4
It hasn't been said that Ben and Isabel are siblings on the show, but it is my theory. They were just too much like each other when she was on the show. And I like this theory very much  Thank you for 2 amazing chapters ;D |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 25, 2007 20:47:08 GMT -4
It hasn't been said that Ben and Isabel are siblings on the show, but it is my theory. They were just too much like each other when she was on the show. And I like this theory very much Thank you for 2 amazing chapters ;D Thank you for reading! |
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Post by sailornova on Mar 27, 2007 0:44:41 GMT -4
Melissaq9....I changed my mind, I will read this story after all! It looks to be...better...than the other one...I hope it makes me forget because I really need to...I should not be thinking sad or bad thoughts, especially not now when my mom needs me!  She is doing better but I could have lost her the doctor said to us today! Her gall stones were poisoning her and she was so full of the poison that some actually leaked out into her system, it's been doing that for well, maybe a month or so...it's hard to say! I will get over this stress and as for the other story, I will just have to compare it to that movie "The Texas chainsaw Massacre: the Next generation." This movie was about a group of teenagers who get kidnapped and killed off one by one by this crazy family out in a remote location but yes, they go into town for pizza, yea! The lead character gets her mind played with by these people, they slap her around and such and at the end, is saved by a guy in a limo who calmly explains to her that it was he who had a deal with the family. She didn't understand so he explained that it was important for people to truly know what fear was and that noone could really know, unless they were, well...scared to death. Literally! But he said that he saved her because he could tell that she knew what fear was now and could of course tell others! She said well, I could tell the police about you and that crazy family and how they killed my friends. He said, go ahead because he was skilled at disappearing and so was the family! He even offered to take her to the hospital or police station. He dropped her off, she told her story, sure enough! The police never found them, not sure if they found the house, can't remember, I think no and the film leaves you screaming and whining"WHY?! OH, WHY?! It makes no sense whatsoever! Schooling people in fear and if they die...whoops my bad! NOOOO! After scaring me to death there was no real closure!? No fair!!! WHY?! Oh, WHYYY?!  |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 27, 2007 18:07:03 GMT -4
Melissaq9....I changed my mind, I will read this story after all! It looks to be...better...than the other one...I hope it makes me forget because I really need to...I should not be thinking sad or bad thoughts, especially not now when my mom needs me! She is doing better but I could have lost her the doctor said to us today! Her gall stones were poisoning her and she was so full of the poison that some actually leaked out into her system, it's been doing that for well, maybe a month or so...it's hard to say! I will get over this stress and as for the other story, I will just have to compare it to that movie "The Texas chainsaw Massacre: the Next generation." This movie was about a group of teenagers who get kidnapped and killed off one by one by this crazy family out in a remote location but yes, they go into town for pizza, yea! The lead character gets her mind played with by these people, they slap her around and such and at the end, is saved by a guy in a limo who calmly explains to her that it was he who had a deal with the family. She didn't understand so he explained that it was important for people to truly know what fear was and that noone could really know, unless they were, well...scared to death. Literally! But he said that he saved her because he could tell that she knew what fear was now and could of course tell others! She said well, I could tell the police about you and that crazy family and how they killed my friends. He said, go ahead because he was skilled at disappearing and so was the family! He even offered to take her to the hospital or police station. He dropped her off, she told her story, sure enough! The police never found them, not sure if they found the house, can't remember, I think no and the film leaves you screaming and whining"WHY?! OH, WHY?! It makes no sense whatsoever! Schooling people in fear and if they die...whoops my bad! NOOOO! After scaring me to death there was no real closure!? No fair!!! WHY?! Oh, WHYYY?! Wow, I have never seen that movie but I am glad that you decided to give "Taken" another chance. I don't think it's really like "Don't Lie To Me" at all. I'm sorry to hear about your mom, I hope she starts feeling better! |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 27, 2007 21:14:27 GMT -4
It feels like it has been forever since I put up the last few chapters! Here is chapter 11-Words This is really a sort of filler chapter that I needed to take the story from one place to another. But, I still like how it turned out. Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3446033/1/Thanks! |
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Post by rednymph234 on Mar 28, 2007 12:50:24 GMT -4
Cute melissa! especially at the end when he kissed her hand. Question: Is Isobel really Ben's sister on the show?
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 28, 2007 18:35:53 GMT -4
Cute melissa! especially at the end when he kissed her hand. Question: Is Isobel really Ben's sister on the show? When she was on the one episode she was in they never said anything about her being Ben's sister. So I am going to go ahead and say no. But I think it would be really cool if they were! |
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Post by rednymph234 on Mar 29, 2007 10:59:46 GMT -4
Cute melissa! especially at the end when he kissed her hand. Question: Is Isobel really Ben's sister on the show? When she was on the one episode she was in they never said anything about her being Ben's sister. So I am going to go ahead and say no. But I think it would be really cool if they were! It would make alot of sense. Um....ur story is rated R? Well.....ahem..............*smirk* when will it happen? You know what I mean................  |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 29, 2007 17:24:26 GMT -4
When she was on the one episode she was in they never said anything about her being Ben's sister. So I am going to go ahead and say no. But I think it would be really cool if they were! It would make alot of sense. Um....ur story is rated R? Well.....ahem..............*smirk* when will it happen? You know what I mean................ Well, they have been married for nearly two years, I hope they would have gotten to that point in their relationship by now. lol Hmm, something might have to come up after Ben's back heals. ;D |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 29, 2007 23:06:45 GMT -4
Chapter 12-Deceit is up! www.fanfiction.net/s/3446033/1/I am so in love with this chapter! This one really gets back to the action! Let me know what you think! Thank you! |
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Post by Isobel on Mar 30, 2007 3:58:49 GMT -4
It's brilliant !
I almost felt her pain when he said that he didn't love her.
Very sad chapter , but I love it !
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 30, 2007 23:39:04 GMT -4
It's brilliant ! I almost felt her pain when he said that he didn't love her. Very sad chapter , but I love it ! Thank you! It was very sad writing the ending, but it had to be done. |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 30, 2007 23:40:26 GMT -4
Here is Chapter 13 of Taken, this one is called "Heartbreak". www.fanfiction.net/s/3446033/1/I'll be honest, Ben might be just a little bit out of character in this one, but it is for a good reason I promise! |
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Post by rednymph234 on Apr 1, 2007 22:53:42 GMT -4
oooooooooooo Nice clincher! Screw Jacob, destiney is not set in stone, destiney is what we make of ourselves. Ben, get your woman!!!!! Jack, go somewhere and be arrogant.
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 2, 2007 0:15:05 GMT -4
oooooooooooo Nice clincher! Screw Jacob, destiney is not set in stone, destiney is what we make of ourselves. Ben, get your woman!!!!! Jack, go somewhere and be arrogant. Whoo, yes! Jack really bothers me with his always thinking he's right. I'm glad you agree! |
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