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Post by sailornova on Apr 2, 2007 0:33:49 GMT -4
oooooooooooo Nice clincher! Screw Jacob, destiney is not set in stone, destiney is what we make of ourselves. Ben, get your woman!!!!! Jack, go somewhere and be arrogant. I haven't had time yet to read this story and I want to, but this sounds like Jacob is in this story and telling Ben that his wife is gone and they were'nt meant to be together! Sounds like Jacob kidnapped her to me! Gawd, I gotta find time for this! Jacob threatening Ben!!! Also, I got an idea for a rewrite of "Don't lie to Me". Melissa, would you consent to that and give me permission to do a rewrite? You will of course be credited and maybe people will be tempted to read your story(ies) as well! Let me know because this story I could write faster than my own story...it will also be rated M or R whatever they have, I forget. For some reason, I thought they stopped taking rated M stories but someone said no...I had'nt been there in a long time until I uploaded chapter one of my new story. |
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 2, 2007 19:33:02 GMT -4
oooooooooooo Nice clincher! Screw Jacob, destiney is not set in stone, destiney is what we make of ourselves. Ben, get your woman!!!!! Jack, go somewhere and be arrogant. I haven't had time yet to read this story and I want to, but this sounds like Jacob is in this story and telling Ben that his wife is gone and they were'nt meant to be together! Sounds like Jacob kidnapped her to me! Gawd, I gotta find time for this! Jacob threatening Ben!!! Also, I got an idea for a rewrite of "Don't lie to Me". Melissa, would you consent to that and give me permission to do a rewrite? You will of course be credited and maybe people will be tempted to read your story(ies) as well! Let me know because this story I could write faster than my own story...it will also be rated M or R whatever they have, I forget. For some reason, I thought they stopped taking rated M stories but someone said no...I had'nt been there in a long time until I uploaded chapter one of my new story. I don't mind at all if you want to tackle your own version of "Don't Lie to Me"! I think it would be interesting to see someone else's take on it. Can't wait to see it! Mel |
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Post by rednymph234 on Apr 2, 2007 20:50:13 GMT -4
Post the next chapter up soon!
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 2, 2007 21:53:31 GMT -4
Post the next chapter up soon! Yes ma'am! |
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 2, 2007 21:54:53 GMT -4
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Post by sailornova on Apr 2, 2007 22:05:02 GMT -4
I don't mind at all if you want to tackle your own version of "Don't Lie to Me"! I think it would be interesting to see someone else's take on it. Can't wait to see it! Mel Thanks! But right now I am writing my letter to Michael first! Then I hope to write both my story I already started and this one! I may even have enough ideas to write a 3rd Lost fanfic!  |
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 3, 2007 21:09:46 GMT -4
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Post by rednymph234 on Apr 3, 2007 22:20:37 GMT -4
Mel--You make ur story out to be like two primitive tribes where the males just capture the females!
Jack--"Jack want woman!"
Ben--"No, Ben want woman!"
Izzie--"Want Ben! Want Ben!"
Sayid--"Oooh ooh ah ah!"
Jack and ben fight to the death, as the two tribes watch. Ben is victor and bothe tribes bow in submission.
N E way, nice take on the Lost story. I guess u have to since we have no idea what the show is about LOL. I like the whole Jacob thing and Isobel...i want her as my sister!!!
Great job!
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 3, 2007 23:46:28 GMT -4
Mel--You make ur story out to be like two primitive tribes where the males just capture the females! Jack--"Jack want woman!" Ben--"No, Ben want woman!" Izzie--"Want Ben! Want Ben!" Sayid--"Oooh ooh ah ah!" Jack and ben fight to the death, as the two tribes watch. Ben is victor and bothe tribes bow in submission. N E way, nice take on the Lost story. I guess u have to since we have no idea what the show is about LOL. I like the whole Jacob thing and Isobel...i want her as my sister!!! Great job! You know, it does seem to be turning out that way doesn't it? Of course, we know who is going to get the girl. Who would ever pick Jack over Ben anyway? Thanks! |
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 5, 2007 0:11:32 GMT -4
Chapter 16-Escape is up. I finally learned how to put lines into the story to separate it so it should be easier to read. I have to admit I'm a little embarassed with this chapter. There is a small part that has some *cough* sex *cough* and I am downright horrible at writing anything like that. I'll just go ahead and apologize now.  |
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Post by rednymph234 on Apr 5, 2007 16:02:09 GMT -4
oooo nice love scene! Ahehe!
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Post by benlinusisagoodguy on Apr 5, 2007 16:12:14 GMT -4
wow thats well good
very talented
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Post by melissaq9 on Apr 7, 2007 0:27:42 GMT -4
Sophie and Chantal--thank you! That particular scene was so hard to write! I've put chapter 17 up. It is called "Jacob" www.fanfiction.net/s/3446033/1/I'm getting a little worried. I feel like the story is kind of losing it's thunder. I feel like it started out well but now is kind of like, "Come on and finish already!" I want to wrap it up, cause it is getting pretty long. I was wondering if ya'll would mind telling me how you might like it to end. I have some ideas rolling around in my head but I'm not sure if I really like them or not. Let me know what you think! Thank you! |
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Post by rednymph234 on Apr 7, 2007 1:28:39 GMT -4
wow Melissa! Great twist! I luved it! It isn't too long, infact if you wrapped it up now it would be losing so much potential.
I luv how Jacob is like the Spirit of the Island, a manefestation/conciousness of a living island. Maybe that is what the island really is in the show?
Geat job!
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Post by twisk on Apr 7, 2007 4:23:46 GMT -4
omg so amny chapters I have missed due to my internet connection problems ... I need to catch up with the story quickly!! So many new Ben-Izzie fick chapters -mmmmmm wonderful ^_^
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