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Post by melissaq9 on Dec 27, 2007 23:04:10 GMT -4
I've begun a new Ben story! Synopsis: Ben destroys M'Lynn's family in the Purge and she escapes the island on the submarine. She soon realizes that she never should have left the island and Ben and spends years trying to find a way back. She'd lost all hope until she boarded flight 815...Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3972926/1/UtopiaI've got good feelings about this one! |
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Post by benlinusisagoodguy on Dec 28, 2007 5:46:38 GMT -4
yay you know i love a mel fic he he.
can't wait for the next bit ;D
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Post by melissaq9 on Jan 10, 2008 22:54:19 GMT -4
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Post by benlinusisagoodguy on Jan 12, 2008 12:18:37 GMT -4
i just read them all gah i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can't wait for more ;D
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Post by melissaq9 on Jan 12, 2008 13:09:23 GMT -4
i just read them all gah i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for more ;D Thanks Soph!!!  I'm working on more right now! |
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Post by truthful on Jan 21, 2008 9:20:00 GMT -4
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Post by dreadpiratejulie on Mar 12, 2008 21:45:11 GMT -4
This is brilliant! I read the whole thing in one sitting. I really loved it. Are you writing more chapters? I'd love to read 'em.  |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 12, 2008 22:41:54 GMT -4
This is brilliant! I read the whole thing in one sitting. I really loved it. Are you writing more chapters? I'd love to read 'em. Thank you! *hugs* I am really proud of this one. And I am writing more, I post a new chapter about every week. |
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Post by dreadpiratejulie on Mar 13, 2008 10:56:09 GMT -4
Well you're brilliant. I love M'Lynn's character.
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 13, 2008 11:12:46 GMT -4
Well you're brilliant. I love M'Lynn's character. Thank you! I think she's pretty cool. I try to write my female characters strong but not scary. lol I acutally got her name from Steel Magnolias.  |
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Post by tigerlily on Mar 13, 2008 14:56:46 GMT -4
I just read it, Mel. Good stuff!! |
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Post by dreadpiratejulie on Mar 13, 2008 17:10:48 GMT -4
Well you're brilliant. I love M'Lynn's character. Thank you! I think she's pretty cool. I try to write my female characters strong but not scary. lol I acutally got her name from Steel Magnolias. Ahhh, I was wondering where you got the name from. It was very different from other names, which is part of why I like it. =) |
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Post by dreadpiratejulie on Mar 13, 2008 17:16:56 GMT -4
One question though, Mel, in Chapter 4 you wrote: "M’Lynn woke up to see Ben watching her sleep. She often woke to find him watching her. He told her it was because she looked so peaceful when she slept."
Does this mean that they were sleeping together then? OR that he would just come into her house/room every morning and watch her sleep. Or did they share a house? Not quite clear on that, but either way, it's really sweet to write in that he watched her sleep. It's very BEN. lol.
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 13, 2008 20:18:59 GMT -4
One question though, Mel, in Chapter 4 you wrote: "M’Lynn woke up to see Ben watching her sleep. She often woke to find him watching her. He told her it was because she looked so peaceful when she slept." Does this mean that they were sleeping together then? OR that he would just come into her house/room every morning and watch her sleep. Or did they share a house? Not quite clear on that, but either way, it's really sweet to write in that he watched her sleep. It's very BEN. lol. I think that by then a while had passed in their relationship. I know it seems like it was the next week but really many months have passed. So, yeah, they shared a house and I would imagine they were sleeping together as well. lol |
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Post by melissaq9 on Mar 13, 2008 20:19:17 GMT -4
I just read it, Mel. Good stuff!! Thanks Em! |
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